The Deep Ones took her on a beautiful summer day.
She’d been lolling in the gentle surf, eyes half-closed against the sun and its glittering reflections. On the cusp of womanhood, her scent drew them in, just as the elders said it had happened in the time of horrors.
The Deep Ones dragged her to the bottom and drowned her, leaving a seed deep in her dead womb. It burst forth, fully tentacled, a storm of blood and bubbles.
Decades later, his stolen daughter a local legend, the fisherman spied a tentacled horror on the bottom – and wept in recognition.
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Thanks to Emma Audsley who posted this excellent image (drawn by Victor Hugo, no less!) as a prompt for a 100-word story on her active and excellent blog, The Horrifically Horrifying Horror Blog. I responded to Emma’s prompt with the story you read above and I’m re-posting it here because I like this tiny tale.
Interestingly, I found the following text from Victor Hugo accompanying the image when I downloaded it from 50 Watts via Flickr. Strange and fun, I think, how it meshes with the story I wrote having only seen the picture. More a testament to Hugo’s drawing than my writing, I suspect.
At night, however, and particularly in the hot season, she becomes phosphorescent. This horrible creature has her passions, she awaits her submarine nuptials. She adorns herself, setting herself alight and illuminating herself; and from the height of some rock she may be seen in the deep obscurity of the waves below, expanding with a pale aureole — a spectral sun.
August 8th, 2012 at 3:43 pm
That’s surreal how you’ve managed to capture the words of Hugo within your story…excellent work!
August 8th, 2012 at 3:44 pm
Reblogged this on The Horrifically Horrifying Horror Blog and commented:
An amazing Reblog from HHHB, a picture prompt & the resulting tale…
August 8th, 2012 at 4:33 pm
Thanks Emma – that was an excellent prompt.
August 9th, 2012 at 12:26 am
Anytime 🙂
August 9th, 2012 at 12:41 pm
LOVE this. A wonderful accompaniment to the picture.
August 9th, 2012 at 2:48 pm
Hi onlyfragments –
Thanks for reading!