One of the great aspects of writing flash fiction is seeing how much story you can pack into a tiny bit of text. This is 100 words to tell a story of revenge. Love, Sex, Betrayal, and Revenge….all in a tiny package.
Image by Steve Snodgrass
The Lost Love of Little Bianca (a tiny tale of big revenge)
The things you hear living in a carnival camp.
Little Bianca, the dwarf whore who could swallow razor blades, and Antoine The Cuke, so named due to his enormous member, were inseparable. Each night, we’d cover our ears as Little Bianca moaned in pleasure. Bianca beamed, even during performances as she ate razor blades.
Then The Cuke broke her heart when she caught him with The Yak Woman.
So one night Little Bianca dragged him behind the Tilt-A-Whirl, got on her knees and gave him the blowjob of his life – fresh from her razor-swallowing performance.
Oh, the screams we heard!
September 10th, 2011 at 9:37 am
Wow, Bob. Cutting edge stuff!
September 10th, 2011 at 10:51 am
Not just the edge, methinks!
September 10th, 2011 at 4:05 pm
September 12th, 2011 at 10:58 pm
i like it. concise, to the point and some other words that make me sound intelligent. seriously though good stuff. 🙂
September 13th, 2011 at 7:16 am
Hey Diego! – thanks for reading. I love this little story..
September 19th, 2011 at 11:37 pm
Bob – It’s Juan – I kinda fell off the earth for a bit but I’m back – don’t want to chat thru this blog so email me at emailmeherebob(put the at sign here)yahoo.com and I’ll send you my real address – I ran into another alum – and would love to catch up with you.
October 1st, 2011 at 7:09 pm
If only I had read this before we went to the Orelean’s County fair…..