No pain if no one feels it?
Car in garage. Duct tape.
I wanted to take another stab at micro-fiction (less than 50 words). How few words does it really take to tell a story? As you can see, micro-fiction has much in common with prose poetry and haiku.
April 14th, 2011 at 11:27 pm
“No pain of no one feel it?” Can any of us leave this world without causing at least someone some level of pain?
And yes, you have proven you can tell a story in 19 words.
April 14th, 2011 at 11:29 pm
And I’ve proven I can’t spell…
“No pain if no one feels it?”
April 15th, 2011 at 6:35 am
Thanks for your comment, Suzanne.
I think maybe the front of this one might be expanded a little more?
These micro pieces are really hard. Each word choice has a huge impact. It’s great practice.
Thanks for reading.